Old: Davidson and Lytle wrote, “There are, of course, a number of straightforward ways to evaluate historical dramas. We can give each film a scrupulous fact-checking to determine which parts are true and which are false” (Davidson 403).

New: Davidson and Lytle acknowledges that, "there are, of course a number of straightforward ways to evaluate historical dramas. We can give each film a scrupulous fact-checking to determine which parts are true and which are false” (Davidson 403).

Old: Windtalkers has some sort of a myth Davidson and Lytle talk about called, “the American melting pot, in which immigrants from a multitude of ethnic backgrounds learn to live in a single nation” (Davidson 406).

New: Davidson and Lytle makes note of the myth of "the American melting pot, in which immigrants from a multitude of ethnic backgrounds learn to live in a single nation” (Davidson 406), which is shown in the film Windtalkers.