Wednesday, October 24, 2007

Revised Quotes

Old:

"Are the costumes right? Did a historical figure do the things he or she is said to have done on screen? If the characters are fictional, are they representative of historical figures in similar situation?" (Davidson 403).

New:

Davidson and Lytle would base their definition of "authentic" on the following: "Are the costumes right?..................in a similar situation" (Davidson 403)?

Old:

"A myth, to quote one dictionary definition........deep commonly felt emotions" (Davidson 405).

New:

As Davidson and Lytle reveal, "A myth.......commonly felt emotions" (Davidson 405).

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