Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Rework on quotations

Original:
Tim O'Brien, an American novelist once said in his article "How to Tell a True War Story" that "War is Hell; War is nasty; war is fun.....war makes you dead."(180)

New:
As Tim O'Brien described in his article "How to Tell a True War Story" that " War is Hell;... war makes you dead."(180)


Original:
"Films strive for an ... human ways." ( Davidson & Lytle 405)
New:
According to Davidson & Lytle, "Films strive for an ... human ways." (405)

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