Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Quotes

Old:
O'Brien mentions in "How to Tell a True War Story" that true war stories often don't have a point, moral, or serious excitement (O'Brien, "How to Tell a True War Story", 174 and 181).

New:
O'Brien tells us thattrue war stories often don't have a point, moral, or serious excitement (O'Brien, "How to Tell a True War Story", 174 and 181).

Old:
They define mythical as "... a real or fictional story with a recurring theme" (Davidson and Lytle, 405)

New:
According to Davidson and Lytle "a real or fictional story with a recurring theme..." is a defintion for myth (Davidson and Lytle, 405)

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