Tuesday, October 23, 2007

A)
Original
“Myth,” as described in “When Trouble Comes,” “deals with expectation rather than reality. (417)”
New
“Myth” as described by Davidson and Lytle, “deals with expectation rather than reality” (417).

B)
Original
The authors then quote New York Magazine that said: “What really matters is authenticity, which this movie has by the ton. (416)”
New
The authors then provide a quote from New York Magazine: “What really matters is authenticity, which this movie has by the ton” (416).

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