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In the article where trouble comes by Davidson and Lytle they speak about how in the Movie the Green Barriet with John Wayne, they make the American soldier out to be a stereotypical macho man. They state, “Wayne ........... Tough" (405).

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In the article where trouble comes Davidson and Lytle suggest that in the movie Green Barriet John Wayne is portryaed as a sterotypical American tough guy: " "Wayne.......... Tough". (405)

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Davidson and Lytle suggest that these movies are mythical in different aspects. They want to make the point that movie companies write their own version of the war, rather than historical facts which they call “Authentic“. Davidson and Lytle authors state, “Grant .............. happend"

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Davidson and Lytle point out that Green Barriets, Platoon and Deer Hunter are "Mythical". The authors explaine this by stating " Grant......... happend" .