For Wednesday, rework all of the quotations in your essay in the manner we described today (if you've forgotten, the handout is listed to the right). To keep things interesting, you will be allowed to use the 'As (name of author) states/indicates,' or the 'According to (name of author),' format only once in your next draft of your paper.
Once you've reworked all of your quotations, post two (both the original and the new version) here on the blog for all of our perusal.
And remember, your final draft of essay 2 is due, stapled to the draft that was due last Friday (10/26), via email on Monday, October 29th.
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Original
He film goes onto many riveting quotes by Colonel Moore to help inspire his men. “Learn to take care of your men and you will learn to take care of each other” he says after listening in on a radio frequency
New
In the film General Moore states “Learn to take care of your men and you will learn to take care of each other", after his meen over hear sounds of death from a communications radio
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